FFF Contest Update

So I made it to the second round of the Fangs, Fur, and Fey contest, where I submitted the first 5 pages of my novel-in-progress to be critiqued by the judges. My pages, and the judge critique, can be found at http://community.livejournal.com/fangs_fur_fey/102711.html?view=1168695#t1168695

Anyone who gets bored and wants to drop by and throw in their two cents is welcome. This is proving to be a valuable experience for me. :>